The Voyage..(A story in 160 characters)

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Maidens voyage fought violent storms
Whilst seas would swamp our battered decks
But dreams are raised from stronger things
As journeys searched for treasure chests…….

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For more marvellous stories in 160 go to http://petzoldspracticalprose.blogspot.com/ (monkey man)

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35 Responses to “The Voyage..(A story in 160 characters)”

  1. […] This post was mentioned on Twitter by Pete Marshall. Pete Marshall said: The Voyage..(A story in 160 characters): http://wp.me/pSxdi-4R […]

  2. Monkey Man Says:

    Great 160 Peter. I love the imagery you created. Thanks for playing and have a solid Sunday.

  3. great 160…i like voyages and ships and treasure…i still dream of being a pirate…

  4. aaarrr matey you did it afterall

    Nicely done

    Happy Monday

  5. well said,
    strong and natural flow!

  6. i am tagging you for a funny story writing game, dont be mad 🙂 🙂

    the game is at:
    http://www.aliceaudrey.com/?page_id=4781

    my post is at:

    http://suryagni.blogspot.com/2010/05/word-association-game-by-alice-audrey.html

    you can check it out. i am already in.

    happy week ahead.

  7. where are you?

  8. nice to hear from you,
    Happy Tuesday!

  9. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/14/week-18-the-perfect-poet-award-announcement/

    week 18 perfect poet award reminder,
    please at least nominate one poet by commenting…
    hope to see a new poem.

  10. thats so cool pete.
    another good one

  11. Adventures, ships, treasure…all that excitement is just a few short lines, awesome!

  12. Wow Pete, what a story in 160! I feel like I’ve run of Snowdon LOL! 🙂 Excellent as always Mr M

  13. a lovely fluent poem.well, done pete.

  14. hey, want to write a few lines in the new story at Tara Miller?

    http://taramillerwrites.wordpress.com/2010/05/19/wheres-tara-on-wordy-wednesday/

    it looks like a really funny story 🙂

  15. Pete,

    Jingle has an award for you here:

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/18/awards-from-wordwand-trisha-and-more/

    Great job!

    Tim Keeton
    (Undead)Poet / Wizard / Teller-of-tale

  16. i like this part the most 🙂 “As journeys searched for treasure chests…….” great story for 160 characters 🙂 i’d try to make one..cool 😀

  17. moondustwriter Says:

    nice 160 I’ve been in the sea theme this weekend
    you go after the treasure

    • i tried, found the chest & started to dig, but the spade snapped and water started to fill the hole!!!! I used my hands and clawed for hours, when i finally pulled the damn thing up it had rotted and turned to slush

  18. hi Pete this was amazing, very well written 🙂

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