Wanting……(A Story In 160 Characters)


She wants…
Moistened lips taste sweetened love
Passions burn fires of wanton youth
He wants….
Sharpened nails trace endless veins
Hunger sinks teeth in savage truths



For more marvellous stories in 160 go to http://petzoldspracticalprose.blogspot.com/ (monkey man)


30 Responses to “Wanting……(A Story In 160 Characters)”

  1. moondustwriter Says:

    so the first part was almost sweet – I guess the blood was sweet

    great 160

    cheers my friend

  2. Monkey Man Says:

    Great 160. I feel like asking for part 2. Have a great weekend.

  3. Wow, a hot one. Mars and Venus meet on the Plains of Passion.

  4. awesome,
    you make it very hot and lovely!

  5. I’m not so sure these two should get together. Deadly hot.

  6. nice…undead porn…lol.
    i wonder
    would they create
    an endless cycle
    their blood mingling?

  7. cool 160 pete, very good story 🙂

  8. hot and somewhat sweet. great story

  9. This is awesome!

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  11. wow is the only word that can explain your expertise- fabulous piece of literature.

  12. “hunger sinks teeth in savage truths”
    phenomenal line to end with—awesome poem

  13. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/28/the-perfect-poet-award-4-week-20-thursday-poets-rally/

    the perfect poet award reminder,
    thank you for the attention!

    please nominate ONE poet for week 21.

  14. hoho nearly very shakesperean but well done..

  15. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/06/05/poetry-awards-4-week-21-participants-and-fresh-poets/

    three poetry awards,
    two general awards.
    Happy Saturday!
    Thank you for attending and leading!

  16. Welcome to Thursday Poets Rally Week 24, here is what you do to participate:

    First, please read the questions and respond:


    Then, Post an original poem in your own blog, and place your link in under the following post to participate:

    Now, visit and comment for a minimum 18 poets from week 24 participants list, after you are done, comment to let Jingle know, you are in perfect shape then…

    Awards are given by Jingle via notifications….

    Thank You for the attention.
    Happy Poetry Reading and writing!

    yes, you can still attend the Rally week 24.

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