Wanting……(A Story In 160 Characters)
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She wants…
Moistened lips taste sweetened love
Passions burn fires of wanton youth
He wants….
Sharpened nails trace endless veins
Hunger sinks teeth in savage truths
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http://en.wordpress.com/tag/160-character-story/
For more marvellous stories in 160 go to http://petzoldspracticalprose.blogspot.com/ (monkey man)
Pete Marshall 
May 30, 2010 at 2:02 pm
so the first part was almost sweet – I guess the blood was sweet
great 160
cheers my friend
May 31, 2010 at 7:05 am
thanks leslie, another tricky mini series in the making LOL
May 30, 2010 at 4:15 pm
Great 160. I feel like asking for part 2. Have a great weekend.
May 31, 2010 at 7:18 am
thanks for that….a mini series in 160
May 30, 2010 at 4:24 pm
Wow, a hot one. Mars and Venus meet on the Plains of Passion.
May 31, 2010 at 7:18 am
thanks Patti, maybe a part 2 is worth it
May 30, 2010 at 6:17 pm
awesome,
you make it very hot and lovely!
😉
May 31, 2010 at 7:19 am
thanks jingle
May 30, 2010 at 7:08 pm
I’m not so sure these two should get together. Deadly hot.
May 31, 2010 at 7:19 am
ha, but they did and boy did they have a good time!!!!
May 30, 2010 at 9:41 pm
nice…undead porn…lol.
i wonder
would they create
an endless cycle
their blood mingling?
May 31, 2010 at 7:20 am
Hi Brian, interesting thought, would it therefore increase one staying power!!!! LOL
May 30, 2010 at 10:28 pm
cool 160 pete, very good story 🙂
May 31, 2010 at 7:20 am
thanks William, cheers mate
May 31, 2010 at 2:43 am
hot and somewhat sweet. great story
May 31, 2010 at 7:22 am
glad you liked it, these 160’s are very hard but very enjoyable to do
May 31, 2010 at 3:01 am
This is awesome!
May 31, 2010 at 7:22 am
Hi mama thanks I am glad you enjoyed it
May 31, 2010 at 11:53 am
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May 31, 2010 at 9:53 pm
wow is the only word that can explain your expertise- fabulous piece of literature.
May 31, 2010 at 10:11 pm
silly but 160 can be so fulfilling, cheers Pete
June 1, 2010 at 1:34 am
please visit to get Shakira back…
many thanks!
June 1, 2010 at 2:11 pm
“hunger sinks teeth in savage truths”
phenomenal line to end with—awesome poem
June 1, 2010 at 5:26 pm
cheers Adam, appreciate that
June 2, 2010 at 7:34 pm
the perfect poet award reminder,
thank you for the attention!
cheers!
please nominate ONE poet for week 21.
June 3, 2010 at 12:02 pm
hoho nearly very shakesperean but well done..
June 4, 2010 at 2:30 pm
short simple & a drama in 160, enjoyed writing this cheers Pete
June 4, 2010 at 4:03 pm
vote if not done so,
or take the award…
June 5, 2010 at 11:46 pm
three poetry awards,
two general awards.
Happy Saturday!
Thank you for attending and leading!
July 7, 2010 at 10:31 am
Welcome to Thursday Poets Rally Week 24, here is what you do to participate:
First, please read the questions and respond:
Then, Post an original poem in your own blog, and place your link in under the following post to participate:
Now, visit and comment for a minimum 18 poets from week 24 participants list, after you are done, comment to let Jingle know, you are in perfect shape then…
Awards are given by Jingle via notifications….
Thank You for the attention.
Happy Poetry Reading and writing!
yes, you can still attend the Rally week 24.