>My Heart Not Knows: by Pete Marshall
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My Heart Not Knows
by Pete Marshall
My heart not knows where love will lie
Upon a cursed & ravaged bed
And storms will rage in darkened skies
My heart not knows where love will lie
No longer touched by waking eyes
A love is spurned as words are said
My heart not knows where love will lie
Upon a cursed & ravaged bed
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Its Triolet Day at One Stop Poetry, hosed by Shan Hendry. This is my attempt at tackling this form.
Pete Marshall 
March 7, 2011 at 12:02 pm
>This is a great Triolet Pete, written in tetrameter and the iambs are spot on. Didn't expect any less from you. Excellent choice of refrains too. Thanks for having a pop!
March 7, 2011 at 12:05 pm
>This was quite good.A wickedly stormy trioletand the refrains just ache.Well done.
March 7, 2011 at 12:33 pm
>This is lovely, Pete.
March 7, 2011 at 1:02 pm
>lol nice work, pete. and I noticed, too, you used the term, "attempt" like I. 🙂 I think your attempt's better :)Monty / bum
March 7, 2011 at 1:52 pm
>yet we reach through the thorns…the method and the message work for mePeace, hp
March 7, 2011 at 2:13 pm
>Great job with the form, and I really like it!!!
March 7, 2011 at 3:21 pm
>Haunting repetition in your Troilet. I like it.
March 7, 2011 at 3:42 pm
>A poetry worth to be read.Nice
March 7, 2011 at 4:09 pm
>A wonderfully evocative piece. The repetitious lines are haunting.
March 7, 2011 at 4:39 pm
>Another great piece on the depths of love and its questions….very well do and thoughtout Peter…loved it…bkm
March 7, 2011 at 5:19 pm
>my heart was stilled as I held my breath. Your words froze time.beautifully donethank you
March 7, 2011 at 6:43 pm
>Beautifully done !!
March 7, 2011 at 7:10 pm
>dark, & very capturing poem. well done pete!
March 7, 2011 at 7:52 pm
>The second refrain is just gorgeous!
March 7, 2011 at 7:57 pm
>Excellent Pete.
March 8, 2011 at 12:07 am
>I know a bed like that one… very evocative triolet.Thank you. My triolet
March 8, 2011 at 12:46 am
>I love your triolet, pete. The words just roll off my tongue…your poetry is so fluid, even within the constraint of a specific form. Hope you are well.
March 8, 2011 at 12:49 am
>Very well written. 🙂
March 9, 2011 at 4:37 am
>loved reading it. all the best.
March 9, 2011 at 3:53 pm
>Deep and questioning. Great write.