The Jackal
Darkened storms brought cooling air
That bathed a face of tempered sweat
As children turned to leave this place
You watched from high at life’s despair.
And theatred dreams hold cherished themes
That took you high in glowing lights
As parts were played you filled the stage
And smiled as others walk your path.
Now hold your breath and hear the beat
Of pulses drum within your ear
But blood wont rush or run as pure
As jackal prowls your hidden fear.
–
Inside this place hung heavens door
That trapped a rook within its spire
And as the bells would resonate
Feathers fell in anguished flight.
And wings would thrash as talons scratched
With eyes like emberred coals
Whilst in the yard where graves are kept
The yews would shake & throe.
Above the moon a cackled laugh
As jackal watched on higher ground
And Reverence prayed & held on to
A chaliced cup from poisoned lands.
–
The vixens yelp was sharp & shrill
As jackal paced his trodden realm
In silvered light her cubs would play
As blood splayed fresh upon his tongue.
He sauntered down beyond the grave
Where once had laid a bridled groom
He stretched his claws and pawed the earth
And scented wafts of sweet perfume.
Yet still she watched from high above
As rook would flap its weary beat
And curl her lips at wicked thoughts
For soon she knew they both would meet………
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May 9, 2010 at 9:20 pm
hi Pete, wow liked this friend, u can write a good poem/story, good imagery friend, well done 🙂
May 10, 2010 at 7:42 am
hi william, thanks…am enjoying this series cheers Pete
May 10, 2010 at 5:29 am
excellent!
May 10, 2010 at 7:43 am
thanks Ji,
May 10, 2010 at 8:51 am
this is absolutely creepy, the more i read it, the worse the chills on my spine! it’s amazing to me how your words could evoke such response in my…i almost chicked out during the first paragraph, knowing i was going to be scared out of my wits, but it was too late to stop…i was already hooked!
May 10, 2010 at 9:27 am
Hi sheri, thank you for such wonderful praise, i will let you know when the next part comes out!!! Thanks Pete
May 10, 2010 at 12:25 pm
pete, great job…you created quite the tension and your imagery is excelent. i am enjoying this series…
May 10, 2010 at 1:50 pm
glad you are & must admit I look forward to writing them…cheers Pete
May 10, 2010 at 7:54 pm
I’m really enjoying this series. The jackal a recurring theme works for you as the harbinger of the otherwordly. Looks like mythical creatures and lands play a big part in your writing too. Very much appreciated and looking forward to reading more of the same 🙂
May 11, 2010 at 9:22 am
Thanks for doing the whole series, to date, one after the other & I am glad it didn’t disappoint, chers Pete
May 10, 2010 at 9:13 pm
Great points! I will be checking back here often!
May 11, 2010 at 9:23 am
please do as this is part of an ongoing series cheers Pete
May 11, 2010 at 7:28 pm
the nightmare continues to get darker
well done
I’m liking seeing all the comments – it’s going great Pete
May 11, 2010 at 7:51 pm
got you in on this one..above the moon a cackled laugh!!!!
comments are good on this one & really enjoying writing it..its an escape from the other series that’s too close to heart!!!!
cheers Pete
May 12, 2010 at 2:48 pm
welcome in.
thanks for the support!
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May 12, 2010 at 7:17 pm
wow that is an awesome write… dark and powerful write… 🙂
May 13, 2010 at 8:19 am
thankyou, glad you liked it and have you read the rest of the series?
May 12, 2010 at 9:59 pm
beautiful..so deep…amazing imagery..beautiful story……loved it……!!!
May 13, 2010 at 8:19 am
thanks, really glad you liked it………..Pete
May 12, 2010 at 11:05 pm
Poe is smiling up there in poet’s heaven– great read!
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May 13, 2010 at 8:30 am
thanks for that, i take that as praise indeed
May 12, 2010 at 11:57 pm
awesome as always
May 13, 2010 at 8:32 am
thanks & looking forward to writing the next part….
May 13, 2010 at 1:35 am
cool poem..your poem somewhat reminded me of dante’s inferno..cool poem..cool story..as always.. 😉
May 13, 2010 at 8:33 am
hi & thanks for the comments, never read dantes inferno, maybe will check it out
May 13, 2010 at 2:20 am
magnificent poem, Pete…well done!
Mine is here
Happy Sensational Wednesday!
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shakira
May 13, 2010 at 8:33 am
Hi & thanks for the praise, cheers Pete
May 13, 2010 at 3:16 am
A classic ballad. Well done.
May 13, 2010 at 8:34 am
thanks for your comments…Pete
May 13, 2010 at 7:45 am
That was excellent, and so atmospheric.
May 13, 2010 at 8:35 am
glad you liked it & am looking forward to writing the next piece…cheers Pete
May 15, 2010 at 8:41 am
That is really good writing!
May 15, 2010 at 10:49 am
hi & many thanks, i really appreciate that cheers Pete
May 15, 2010 at 2:19 pm
I’m having a look around. It seems that you have a real fan club.
May 15, 2010 at 2:47 pm
thanks Guy for coming over, appreciate it bud, cheers Pete
May 28, 2010 at 5:36 pm
the way of your writing is sometimes breathtaking. this poem was very interesting though will have to read again to grasp the core meaning.
May 28, 2010 at 10:01 pm
ah but Trisha, its not ended and read the series from the start, have almost written the next piece so should be out any day now!!!!