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The Victim……..(A story in 160 characters)

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With eyes like pools of azure blue
That pierced a mind and hearts would swoon
Whilst tempered steel could slave no thirst
When lust took hold this nights full moon

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For more marvellous stories in 160 go to http://petzoldspracticalprose.blogspot.com/ (monkey man)


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25 Responses to “The Victim……..(A story in 160 characters)”

  1. Monkey Man Says:
    May 23, 2010 at 7:44 pm

    Great poetid 160. Thanks for playing and adding your creativity to this ecclettic mix of Sunday 160s. Have a solid Sunday.

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  2. brian Says:
    May 23, 2010 at 8:15 pm

    oh hot 160…who will be her next victim….smiles.

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  3. wordwand Says:
    May 23, 2010 at 8:36 pm

    well done pete, have a happy sunday.

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  4. moondustwriter Says:
    May 23, 2010 at 8:47 pm

    don’t be blaming the moon now (smiles)

    really powerful in 160

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  5. petemarshall1 Says:
    May 23, 2010 at 9:28 pm

    i’m always blaming the moon or at least howling at it!!!

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  6. Jingle Says:
    May 23, 2010 at 11:27 pm

    very impressive 160.

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  8. Patti Says:
    May 24, 2010 at 3:58 pm

    (pant pant)

    Interesting phenomenon: Brian commented, “who will be HER next victim.” And here I am, thinking, “oh, I want to meet HIM.” We are all the center of our own universe.

    I think you hit it spot on. Excellent!

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  9. petemarshall1 Says:
    May 24, 2010 at 4:40 pm

    thanks again jingle

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    • petemarshall1 Says:
      May 25, 2010 at 10:37 am

      hi jingle, this is especially important for me as i have been on a self doubting journey of late. Thank you to all who have read, appreciated & took the time to comment…i really do appreciate this

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  11. trisha Says:
    May 26, 2010 at 5:43 pm

    Simply fantastic. reminded me of Lucy in dracula.

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  12. Menina Says:
    May 27, 2010 at 10:15 am

    This is great! I always love reading poems/prose about the moon

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  14. Jingle Says:
    May 28, 2010 at 7:26 pm

    The Celebrate Blogger of April Award Announcement (Art, Humor, Short Stories)

    you know already…
    vote

    humor,
    short stories,
    art or carton….

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  15. Jannie Funster Says:
    May 29, 2010 at 7:45 pm

    Move over Shakespeare! Pete’s in the bard’s house!!

    Loved this!

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