The Victim……..(A story in 160 characters)

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With eyes like pools of azure blue
That pierced a mind and hearts would swoon
Whilst tempered steel could slave no thirst
When lust took hold this nights full moon

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25 Responses to “The Victim……..(A story in 160 characters)”

  1. Monkey Man Says:

    Great poetid 160. Thanks for playing and adding your creativity to this ecclettic mix of Sunday 160s. Have a solid Sunday.

  2. oh hot 160…who will be her next victim….smiles.

  3. well done pete, have a happy sunday.

  4. moondustwriter Says:

    don’t be blaming the moon now (smiles)

    really powerful in 160

  5. i’m always blaming the moon or at least howling at it!!!

  6. very impressive 160.

  7. (pant pant)

    Interesting phenomenon: Brian commented, “who will be HER next victim.” And here I am, thinking, “oh, I want to meet HIM.” We are all the center of our own universe.

    I think you hit it spot on. Excellent!

  8. thanks again jingle

    • hi jingle, this is especially important for me as i have been on a self doubting journey of late. Thank you to all who have read, appreciated & took the time to comment…i really do appreciate this

  9. Simply fantastic. reminded me of Lucy in dracula.

  10. This is great! I always love reading poems/prose about the moon

  11. Move over Shakespeare! Pete’s in the bard’s house!!

    Loved this!

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