>The River Runs Wild…(A Tale In 160 Characters)
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The River Runs Wild…
(A Tale In 160 Characters)
By Pete Marshall
The current flowed beyond the rocks
Where fish would dart and children stopped
And mothers would grieve on Parson’s Lawn
As waters still flowed from dusk till dawn
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Pete Marshall 
August 1, 2010 at 3:37 pm
>and the river rolls on…nice 160 pete…
August 1, 2010 at 3:37 pm
>welcome back!
August 1, 2010 at 3:40 pm
>Your few words sure made the river feel wild. Nicely done š
August 1, 2010 at 4:09 pm
>Pete, this is beautiful and so poignant. I really like it. And welcome back!
August 1, 2010 at 4:44 pm
>Pretty! I like it and am ready to see it for myself! Good one!
August 1, 2010 at 4:56 pm
>So much packed into your 160c. Well done!
August 1, 2010 at 4:57 pm
>So much packed into your 160c. Well done!
August 1, 2010 at 4:59 pm
>This is so poetic. Such nice rhythm.
August 1, 2010 at 5:11 pm
>Welcome back, Pete. Great 160. I would have seen the image through your words alone.
August 1, 2010 at 5:42 pm
>Another masterpiece like all of your poetry. I just love your work.Christine
August 1, 2010 at 5:45 pm
>can feel the flow in your words – and hear the river song..
August 1, 2010 at 7:57 pm
>Pete that was some beautiful writing there my blog friend you raised the bar on 160. Glad you back in the swing of the community again.Joanny
August 1, 2010 at 10:42 pm
>Good to have you back, Pete! :)Let the waters roll on…
August 1, 2010 at 10:45 pm
>very nice pete, well written š
August 2, 2010 at 1:17 am
>Welcome back Pete…loved the flow of the current from dusk till dawn~
August 2, 2010 at 1:50 am
>A beautiful and haunting rhyme! Loved it!
August 2, 2010 at 4:31 am
>The juxtapositon of the life around and in the water and the mothers grieving…you pack a lot in 160 characters!Lovely to have you back, Pete.
August 2, 2010 at 8:45 am
>A beautiful analogy.. Life too goes on.. Things come our way, they go.. but we march on, with the eternal hope of finding our dawn as well.. A beautifully out verse here, Pete..Thanks for this lovely 160!
August 2, 2010 at 1:04 pm
>Gorgeous!
August 2, 2010 at 3:32 pm
>spent a lot of time over the last week amongst the rivers & sea..needless to say the danger is always there..thanks for reading guys..Pete
August 2, 2010 at 5:40 pm
>welcome back…http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/02/the-celebrate-blogger-awards-plus-prayers-4-viola/you have a runner up on short stories award in my wordpress.com…Happy Monday!
August 2, 2010 at 5:42 pm
>beautiful 160.
August 3, 2010 at 12:28 am
>Rivers stop for no one. Nice 160, musical…like the water's song.-C
August 4, 2010 at 8:27 pm
>Quite lovely 160.