The Hunger
Shadows danced
on blood washed walls
as dreams would melt
on bended knee.
A pulse that beat
would hide the truth
in rooms that dripped
with grime & sleaze.
–
And I was there
with you my friend
whose hand I held
that led the way.
And as you bathed
in youths free love
across the throat
my smile would fade.
–
We took the heights
in shanty town
awash with
sacred chants.
We watched belief
that called my soul
yet burned
my silver dream.
–
And as we left
I felt your heart
warm within my fist,
that beat a drum
to warn myself
of life’s most
vicious twists….
April 23, 2010 at 9:13 pm
a nice use and association of words, a cute poem.
April 28, 2010 at 8:15 am
many thanks
April 24, 2010 at 11:35 am
Wonderful poetry Pete 🙂
April 24, 2010 at 12:26 pm
awesome poem,
you have been doing amazing job,
you are well deserved the award.
Happy Saturday!
April 24, 2010 at 4:18 pm
very beautiful, a little scary.
April 24, 2010 at 4:20 pm
Dear friend,
A little award for you at my blog specially decked up for awards- accepting and sharing.
With warmest affections,
April 28, 2010 at 8:20 am
thankyou Trisha I really do appreciate these
cheers
Pete
April 24, 2010 at 10:07 pm
well isn’t that creepy!!!
nicely done Pete
April 25, 2010 at 2:24 am
three poetry awards,
hot blog award,
more…
April 28, 2010 at 8:18 am
hey I’m enoying this Ji, thank you
April 25, 2010 at 2:04 pm
wow. wicked cool poem today…love the quiet intensity…
April 28, 2010 at 8:17 am
thanks …..this was a moment of boredom that triggered an idea, i let it go and voila!!! cheers Pete
April 26, 2010 at 1:56 pm
It’s deep and macabre. You have a great way of expressing yourself and getting the reader to feel what is meant to be fealt through your words and the images they depict, even though I believe the true meaning can only be known to you, the poet 🙂
April 26, 2010 at 6:21 pm
thanks for your wonderful comment
April 26, 2010 at 2:01 pm
Hi & thanks fro your comments to everyone on this series. Eash poem follows so I hope you are wondering where its going? cheers Pete
April 26, 2010 at 2:58 pm
5 awards on the bottom,
enjoy some!
April 28, 2010 at 8:16 am
hi jingle & greatly accepted thankyou
May 10, 2010 at 7:32 pm
This reminded me of a voodoo scene I saw in some horror movie. Gripping. Really good use of rhyme Peter. Spine chilling indeed.
May 11, 2010 at 9:22 am
again loved your comments cheers Pete
May 15, 2010 at 5:36 am
LOVED that one Pete! in fact i am enjoying my ride in your wonderful hills ..it is taking me places that i am almost speechless! would love if you could pass by my sanctuary as well..:) let me know what you think 🙂
here..http://mysunshineforeverblogger.blogspot.com/ ..thanks, keep it up!
cheers
Abeer
May 15, 2010 at 5:58 am
Hi abeer & thanks for the visit, hope you enjoy the series & tanks for the encouragement..cheers Pete